す。ちなみに、readingは57%,listeningは76%正答していました。タイピングが面倒だったので、大文字の場所を小文字にしています。そこは減点しないでください。 topic:Today, there are machines in some stations that rent umbrellas to people. Do you think these machines will become more common in the future? point:convenience,cost,the environment i think that these machines will become more common in the future. i have two reasons about it. firstly, it is convenience for us to can rent umbrellas in some stations. i have never used these yet. but i will use these if i lost my umbrella. secondly, this attempt will become a public concern. for example,it can provide a good opportunity for us to consider the environment. for these two reasons, i believe that these machines will become more common in the future. (84) ↑ i have never used these yet.の部分をi don't experience this yet.にした気もするのですが、こちらの文だったらどうなるでしょうか? 長文になってしまいましたが、よろしくお願いいたします。