GPTにかけただけでの添削は不要です。 またもし英検について知識があれば、何点程度取れそうか教えてください。 TOPIC Will societies with low birthrates face a crisis in the future? POINTS ● Environmental problem ● Food shortage ● Technological innovation ● Workforce I do not think that societies with low birthrates will face a crisis in the future. I have two reasons to support my opinion in terms of food shortages and environmental problems. The first reason is that food shortages will be improved. As the population in societies continues to decrease, the amount of needed food has also decreased. As a result, all people will be provided with enough food to live comfortably. The second reason is that the planet's environment will be better. In fact, one of the major causes of pollution is high birthrates. Therefore, low birthrates allow less CO2 to be emitted, so they lead to an environmentally friendly society. For the reasons mentioned above, I do not believe that low birthrates will cause societies to face a crisis in the future.