英検準2級のライティングの添削お願いします。Q. Do you th

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ink it is good for students to make study plans for their summer vacations?

A. I think it is good for students to make study plans for their summer vacations.
I have two reasons. First, summer vacations have a lot of days, so they need to make a lot of times for study. Second, if they make study plans, they try to study easily.

もし良ければ何点くらいになるのかも教えて頂けると助かります。

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A. I think it is (X good → a good idea) for students(X to make study plans for their summer vacations).
I have two reasons. First, summer vacations (X have → has) a lot of days, so (X they need to make a lot of times for study → they need to make good use of them). Second, if they make study plans, (X they try to study easily → they are sure to get good results).