発してると思われますが指摘含め何卒お願いします。 2019-3 Do companies need to improve the way they treat their workers? •Health ・Male-female equality ・salaries ・work-life balance In my opinion, companies need to improve the way they treat their workers, In particular, They should more emphasis on male-female equality and work-life balance. First, it is different between males' salaries and females' salaries, Many female workers are sad for such a low income. As a result, women has led to do out of job. Second, more and more people think about work-life balance these days when they choose companies. This is because both of parents cooperate with each other to rising up children. As a result, Using computer in their house is much common way to work. In conclusion, for these two reasons, I belive that it it is essential to take care of their employees from the company which they are working.