英検2級 writing採点

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英検2級 writing採点1/20(土)に行われた英検2級の採点をお願いします。ちなみに、readingは57%,listeningは76%正答していました。タイピングが面倒だったので、大文字の場所を小文字にしています。そこは減点しないでください。

topic:Today, there are machines in some stations that rent umbrellas to people. Do you think these machines will become more common in the future?

point:convenience,cost,the environment

i think that these machines will become more common in the future. i have two reasons about it.
firstly, it is convenience for us to can rent umbrellas in some stations. i have never used these yet. but i will use these if i lost my umbrella.
secondly, this attempt will become a public concern. for example,it can provide a good opportunity for us to consider the environment.
for these two reasons, i believe that these machines will become more common in the future. （84）

↑ i have never used these yet.の部分をi don't
experience this yet.にした気もするのですが、こちらの文だったらどうなるでしょうか？

長文になってしまいましたが、よろしくお願いいたします。

Answer 1

i think that these machines will become more common in the future. i have two reasons for it.
firstly, it is convenient for us to rent umbrellas in some stations. i have never used these yet. but i will use these if i lose my umbrella.
secondly, this attempt will become a public concern. for example, it can provide a good opportunity for us to consider the environment.
for these two reasons, i believe that these machines will become more common in the future.

75%前後だと思います。
祈 2級合格