という指定です。 問題Do you think it is a good idea for people to have a car?(外国人の知り合いに質問されたという設定) 私の答え I think it is good for people to have a car. I have two reasons for it. First,we can go to many places. This is because there are a lot of places to visit. Second,we can go to favorite time. Public vehicles time has been decided.It’s inconvenience. Therefore,I think people has a car is good. (59語) 私なりに作ったのですが、どこを直せばいいのか分かりません……。どうかよろしくお願いします!!